This is when the general of the shinobi alliance and his righthand decide it's time to report to duty. Overall, I believe this to be a very good character development story. A good addition. My problem is: anticipation. I can't wait for the chapters to come out because there are certain events I'm waiting for. For instance, Sasuke's entrance into the war. Naruto's confrontation of Tobi, especially if Naruto's clone conveys the knowledge that Tobi isn't who he says he is.
Next up, though, it seems as though we're having a Kage free-for-all. It'll be interesting to see how well the Kage's work with one another, as well as any jutsu that they may have been holding back.